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Very good background

I let it play, while multi tasking and 3 minutes in, I realized that there was music playing, so as far as background music goes, it gets a 5.

onestaridiot responds:

Thanks, i like that...... i only just realized that i screwed up at the end of the song....
and thanks for the review.

Lil' empty.

I think the guitars sound a bit too harmonized and I feel like there's a lack of any lead guitar.

I think some work with filter cutoffs with the lead would work really well at 1:37.

DHansen90 responds:

elaborate on the filter cutoff thing please. im going to rerecord a lot of it, probably write better lead part and add more to it. too harmonized?

Good enough.

Sounds good. Kicks my ass =|

djJPA responds:

Thank you!

+ don't think that way, my FIRST song is on here, titled Hell I Know (or something like that..) and that was terrible! But after much accumulated practice, I have increased my knowledge and ability.

Same will go for you if you keep trying!
and if you want some assistance with anything, PM me and i'll give you out my email.

itty bitty short?

Kind of short for a final, isn't it?

Jakesnke17 responds:

You do have a point...

I'll see what I can do. :)

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very chill. 5 stars.

Math368 responds:

Thank you brotha, much appreciated on the review.

Love zeros, right?

Definitely worth more than the 0.41 it currently has.

Sto0g3 responds:

:) Glad you feel that way. I know NG votes have little relevance to music quality- but when all your stuff gets zeroed, you begin to wonder...

Too long

I think it'd be much better if you condensed it down to about 3:00. I think there's too much repetition and too frequently new sounds seem to be introduced in a solo manner without taking advantage of harmonics.

Also, there is clearly room for a higher pitched melody up to the 2:00 mark.

DarkMInds responds:

Pretty much everything before 2:17 was made a a couple days before the ending, Everything afterwards was made in one night. I get a lot of iffy results when I span a project over several days.. Can't keep my head in the ideal of what I was going for.
All of my music has "Room for imrovement" Not sure what I was going for here, but the sound flows well and things seem to work together. After a while I might go and remake a lot of my older songs, who knows. We'll see ^_^

Thanks for the review.

"gave me a really funny vibe"

It put my mind somewhere else. I like the sharp transition just before the 1:00 mark.

DjDema responds:

Exactly! I got similar feelings. It's very interesting haha, I kind of surprised myself with the way the song moved. I'm glad you liked it and thanks for the comment!

Metroid

Reminds me of Metroid Prime.

elektrobear responds:

A particular song or just the general sound? I'll take that as a praise, thanks!

Hmmm... welll....

Ain't bad. I downloaded. 4/5

I think the beat should have made an intro a bit sooner though. It'd been awesome at 0:48.

DaemosLives responds:

Thanks man!
The early beat was an idea I had tried on earlier revisions of the song, but i felt it detracted from the dreamier section in the latter half of the song. Then again I'm still learning though =) Thanks for your review bro!

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